hegemony

Holy. Shit.

I am just -- wow. Wow. I love the way that you used the friendships, and I am in awe of how simultaneously funny and damn sexy this is. Loved reading your take on the characters; this was hot, but there was a hell of a lot of character depth sprinkled through it.

I loved some of the more background stuff, like that Jarvis listens to Rhodey over Tony and Tony's image of Rhodey as a super-spy; I loved Pepper and Rhodey ganging up on Tony like they did. The dialogue is really fabulous. My personal favorites were Rhodey's line to the 'wonder-twins' and Tony and Pepper's exchange about pink armor, but it was all really in-character. The last line of the story is perfect.

I've been wondering where all of the threesome fic is, as it seemed like something that fandom couldn't resist, and this is my answer. You have some typos here and there that you may want to check (the ones that I remember are 'sadder' instead of 'solder,' and 'dully noted' instead of 'duly noted'), but otherwise, man was this a fun read.

EDIT: Holy shit, I forgot my favorite line. He can go dollars to doughnuts at the playboy mansion every day of the week, but one look from Jim Rhodes and it is on until neither one of them can bear to stand. That was where I nearly spit soda everywhere, and sat up and started taking notice.